Jason Wojo
In the group shots, of you next to Eddie Linda, I detected some good traits. I needed to see the larger photos to get a better idea.
There's no doubt your upper body shows great muscle separation. Your back is especially impressive with good heads. This is a particular focus of the judges, along with the upper chest. Both are thin sheaths of muscle which are not easy to get size in.
Keep putting on size. It seems to be falling well. Although not by much at all, you seem to be outweighed in the lineup. Add some more mass to your legs. Some poses you're hitting well. Your final shot is nearly perfect. In most other shots you appear to partially hit the pose really well (especially in the upper body), and partially off (particularly in the legs).
My bottom line is fine tune the posing, bring the legs up to the upper body, and keep going with size. Your potential is high. If you get on the right course, I think you could be riveting pretty quickly. If you don't see and address these points, you'll be slowly progressing for years. You have some points, like your delts, that are unusually strong.
I agree with you about the quad sweep. I disagree with you about the back thickness. It's hard to tell about the back width. It may be a matter of presentation. I'm uncertain.