I believe he should include a bit more about himself. He needs to answer a potential companion's question "Why should I want to spend time with you"
I did that by stating I am a 49 year old married guy who lives in Atlanta and would like to have sex with 2 hot fitness models. I have begun the process of dialogue. Now I wait to cull thru the many responses I am certain to receive.
Better, but all you seek is a female training partner? I typically pick the hottest girl in the gym and then follow her arond doing exactly what she does. Only I use more weight because I know that impresses them. Wa - la, Trainer Partner!!