New guy- need judges opinions

[intenceman]

I'm new to this board though I've posted to others. I've got great feedback from others on board, but my placings, while up a few notches- got my first top 5 trophy the Excalibur in the Superheavies this month- are kind of all over the map . I really want to know what the judges are seeing, especialy with presentation. wil post a few that I hope will give an overall view.
i'm on the left in tthse photos.

Thanks in advance,
James

 

[intenceman]

a few more

On the left in these also.
hopefuly this will give enough views- let me know.

James

 

[intenceman]

from the night show

heres some from the night show

 

[intenceman]

and the last few

and finishing of my routine... and now any constructive criticism, and or feedback, good and bad..

 

[worldspan]

Will reserve my comments to your goals for the future, not your condition as shown in pics posted.

I would say take 2 years off from competing and work big time on legs
and tri's areas where you need to bring yourself up. The goal should be
that when you return to stage in that time, a jaw dropping improvement
is shown and the judges will recognize you accordingly.

Worldspan

 

[LouMessina]

intenceman

You also appear to be stronger in the fullness and mass area. I would concentrate on some tightness & muscle separation.

 

[intenceman]

Thank you both. I appreciate the feedback
Lou, I think I got what you were saying , but I'm not totally sure from the wording, if you were saying mass and fullness were my strong points, and that I need to focus better 'condtioning'..can you confirm?

Thanks again, Happy Holidays,
James

 

[intenceman]

another -new- photo

here nother view if this helps

 

[Big A]

here nother view if this helps

You need to resize that photo to a more manageable size.

 

[intenceman]

ok resized it

any input?

 

[mikeheavypecs]

Photos are too small to really analyze............

 

[VulgarDisplay]

Photos are too small to really analyze............

Agreed..please resize and repost if you would like some accurate feedback.

 

[LouMessina]

intenceman

Lou, I think I got what you were saying , but I'm not totally sure from the wording, if you were saying mass and fullness were my strong points, and that I need to focus better 'condtioning'..can you confirm? Thanks again, Happy Holidays, James

In your first post, 3rd-5th photos, compare your leg separation to the other two competitors.

In your 2nd post, look at the 4th photo. There's no separation in the abs.

Particularly in comparison to the competitor on the right, you can see the difference in muscle separation and tightness.

You need to come in tighter.

 

[intenceman]

NEW Progress pics- 10 weeks out

Since I had so much trouble getting the site to upload my pics last time,, I just posted on my site the pics taken Monday- about 10 weeks out- was 248-250 lbs at the time.

**broken link removed**

Any constrructive feedback is welcome.

James