Hey Eclipse, I was at the Cal and I sat with the judges and I remember you. At the Cal this year what stood in your way, as you know I think, was conditioning. If you are planning on moving up to the light heavies you will probably need more than one year, I suggest that you put on 10 more lbs and get in superb condition and you should be a very good middle wt.
Your biggest weak points are these that i saw: hamstring bellies (need more thickness), back thickness, and a little more quad flare. However, without you being in the kind of condition that you really needed to be in, it is a little hard to see where other weaknesses may show up.
Keep plugging away, you are on the right track. Oh, and one more thing...posing! This will hold you back also, you just didn't hit your poses very well. It was often hard to see what you really had because you simply didn't show it off well. The rule is...if you don't show it...you don't have it. Work with someone on posing. The best in this sport don't have perfect physiques, but they always know how to show off their physiques to the fullest advantage. Good luck bro.